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bug#11862: [PATCH 9/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Use passive voice
From: |
Michael Witten |
Subject: |
bug#11862: [PATCH 9/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Use passive voice |
Date: |
Wed, 04 Jul 2012 20:16:07 -0000 |
There's no value in using `you' as the subject here, especially given
that the surrounding text doesn't do so.
---
doc/lispref/intro.texi | 2 +-
1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/doc/lispref/intro.texi b/doc/lispref/intro.texi
index a68e7a9..da39375 100644
--- a/doc/lispref/intro.texi
+++ b/doc/lispref/intro.texi
@@ -508,7 +508,7 @@ emacs-build-time
The value of this variable is the version of Emacs being run. It is a
string such as @code{"23.1.1"}. The last number in this string is not
really part of the Emacs release version number; it is incremented
-each time you build Emacs in any given directory. A value with four
+each time Emacs is built in any given directory. A value with four
numeric components, such as @code{"22.0.91.1"}, indicates an
unreleased test version.
@end defvar
--
1.7.11.1.29.gf71be5c
- bug#11862: [PATCH 8/9 v3] doc/lispref/intro.texi: More precise language for what a variable is, (continued)
- bug#11862: [PATCH 8/9 v3] doc/lispref/intro.texi: More precise language for what a variable is, Michael Witten, 2012/07/06
- bug#11862: [PATCH 8/9 v3] doc/lispref/intro.texi: More precise language for what a variable is, Wolfgang Jenkner, 2012/07/06
- bug#11862: [PATCH 8/9 v3] doc/lispref/intro.texi: More precise language for what a variable is, Drew Adams, 2012/07/06
- bug#11862: Splitting and simplifying [PATCH 8/9], Michael Witten, 2012/07/06
- bug#11862: [PATCH 8a/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Introduce the term `value' early on, Michael Witten, 2012/07/06
- bug#11862: [PATCH 8b/2] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Reduce and reorganize node `A sample Variable Description', Michael Witten, 2012/07/06
- bug#11862: [PATCH 8/9 v3] doc/lispref/intro.texi: More precise language for what a variable is, Richard Stallman, 2012/07/07
- bug#11862: [Copyright assignment], Chong Yidong, 2012/07/08
- bug#11862: [PATCH 8/9 v2] doc/lispref/intro.texi: More precise language for what a variable is, Eli Zaretskii, 2012/07/06
bug#11862: [PATCH 6/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Re-fill a paragraph, Michael Witten, 2012/07/04
bug#11862: [PATCH 9/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Use passive voice,
Michael Witten <=
- bug#11862: [PATCH 9/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Use passive voice, Richard Stallman, 2012/07/05
- bug#11862: [PATCH 9/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Use passive voice, Stephen Berman, 2012/07/05
- bug#11862: [PATCH 9/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Use passive voice, Eli Zaretskii, 2012/07/05
- bug#11862: [PATCH 9/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Use passive voice, Glenn Morris, 2012/07/05
- bug#11862: [PATCH 9/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Use passive voice, Michael Witten, 2012/07/05
- bug#11862: [PATCH 9/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Use passive voice, Stephen Berman, 2012/07/05
bug#11862: [PATCH 0/9] doc/lispref/intro.texi: Copyediting, Stefan Monnier, 2012/07/04