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[Bug-gnupress] Review of GCC Manual, Section 18


From: D F
Subject: [Bug-gnupress] Review of GCC Manual, Section 18
Date: Mon, 28 Apr 2003 22:22:22 -0400
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I've attached a file with my suggested edits for section 18. Most of 
these edits are an effort to avoid the second person voice in 
favour of the (often more stilted) passive voice, as per the email 
from Lisa earlier today.

Note that, when I sent along the edits for section 11 a couple of 
days ago, I did not review for voice other than to ensure that the 
voice of the section was broadly consistent.

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Dave Fluri
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