[Emacs-diffs] trunk r115861: * eshell.texi (What Eshell is not): Clean up confusing clause.

[Aidan Gauland]

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revno: 115861
revision-id: address@hidden
parent: address@hidden
committer: Aidan Gauland <address@hidden>
branch nick: trunk
timestamp: Sat 2014-01-04 12:14:16 +1300
message:
  * eshell.texi (What Eshell is not): Clean up confusing clause.
modified:
  doc/misc/ChangeLog             changelog-20091113204419-o5vbwnq5f7feedwu-6331
  doc/misc/eshell.texi           
eshell.texi-20091113204419-o5vbwnq5f7feedwu-6299

=== modified file 'doc/misc/ChangeLog'
--- a/doc/misc/ChangeLog        2014-01-03 14:18:24 +0000
+++ b/doc/misc/ChangeLog        2014-01-03 23:14:16 +0000
@@ -1,3 +1,7 @@
+2014-01-03  Aidan Gauland  <address@hidden>
+
+       * eshell.texi (What Eshell is not): Clean up confusing clause.
+
 2014-01-03  Glenn Morris  <address@hidden>
 
        * efaq-w32.texi, reftex.texi: Use @insertcopying in non-TeX.

=== modified file 'doc/misc/eshell.texi'
--- a/doc/misc/eshell.texi      2014-01-03 01:55:15 +0000
+++ b/doc/misc/eshell.texi      2014-01-03 23:14:16 +0000
@@ -147,11 +147,11 @@
 Eshell is @emph{not} a replacement for system shells such as
 @command{bash} or @command{zsh}.  Use Eshell when you want to move
 text between Emacs and external processes; if you only want to pipe
-output from one external process to another, to another, use a system
-shell, because Emacs's IO system is buffer oriented, not stream
-oriented, and is very inefficient at such tasks.  If you want to write
-shell scripts in Eshell, don't; either write an elisp library or use a
-system shell.
+output from one external process to another (and then another, and so
+on), use a system shell, because Emacs's IO system is buffer oriented,
+not stream oriented, and is very inefficient at such tasks.  If you
+want to write shell scripts in Eshell, don't; either write an elisp
+library or use a system shell.
 
 Some things Eshell just doesn't do well.  It fills the niche between
 IELM and your system shell, where the peculiar use-cases lie, and it