[elpa] externals/olivetti c2b1100 025/134: Updated README and Commentary

[Stefan Monnier]

branch: externals/olivetti
commit c2b11008912f35ef9d379359115b5bf091670449
Author: Paul Rankin <address@hidden>
Commit: Paul Rankin <address@hidden>

    Updated README and Commentary
---
 README.md   | 31 +++++++++++++++++++------------
 olivetti.el | 23 +++++++++++------------
 2 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 5521b71..8347b9c 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -3,25 +3,29 @@ Olivetti
 
 Olivetti is a simple Emacs minor mode for a nice writing environment.
 
-Features
---------
+![screenshot](http://files.paulwrankin.com/olivetti/screenshot.png)
+
+Pictured: *Big Fish* by John August using using text body width of 66
+(top, also using [Fountain Mode][]), lorem ipsum text using text body
+width of 80 (bottom)
 
-- set a desired text body width to automatically resize window margins
-  to keep the text comfortably in the middle of the window
-- text body width can be the number of characters (an integer) or a
-  fraction of the window width (a float between 0.0 and 1.0)
-- optionally hide the modeline for distraction-free writing
+[fountain mode]: https://github.com/rnkn/fountain-mode
 
-Olivetti actually duplicates a subset of features already present in
-[Writeroom-mode][], but Olivetti keeps all features buffer-local.
+Features
+--------
 
-[writeroom-mode]: https://github.com/joostkremers/writeroom-mode 
"Writeroom-mode"
+- Set a desired text body width to automatically resize window margins
+  to keep the text comfortably in the middle of the window.
+- Text body width can be the number of characters (an integer) or a
+  fraction of the window width (a float between 0.0 and 1.0).
+- Interactively change body width with `olivetti-expand`,
+  `olivetti-shrink` and `olivetti-set-width`.
+- Optionally hide the modeline for distraction-free writing.
 
 Requirements
 ------------
 
-- Emacs 24.1 (not tested on earlier versions, only tested on Mac OS X
-  and Linux, not tested on Windows).
+- Emacs 24.4
 
 Installation
 ------------
@@ -29,6 +33,9 @@ Installation
 Olivetti is available through [MELPA][] and [MELPA-stable][]. I
 encourage installing the stable version.
 
+Alternately, download the [latest release][] and put it in your
+`load-path`.
+
 [melpa]: http://melpa.milkbox.net "MELPA"
 [melpa-stable]: http://melpa-stable.milkbox.net "MELPA"
 [latest release]: https://github.com/rnkn/olivetti/releases/latest "Olivetti 
latest release"
diff --git a/olivetti.el b/olivetti.el
index 71d9903..d12e691 100644
--- a/olivetti.el
+++ b/olivetti.el
@@ -28,22 +28,18 @@
 ;; Features
 ;; --------
 
-;; - set a desired text body width to automatically resize window margins
-;;   to keep the text comfortably in the middle of the window
-;; - text body width can be the number of characters (an integer) or a
-;;   fraction of the window width (a float between 0.0 and 1.0)
-;; - optionally hide the modeline for distraction-free writing
-
-;; Olivetti actually duplicates a subset of features already present in
-;; [Writeroom-mode][], but Olivetti keeps all features buffer-local.
-
-;; [writeroom-mode]: https://github.com/joostkremers/writeroom-mode 
"Writeroom-mode"
+;; - Set a desired text body width to automatically resize window margins
+;;   to keep the text comfortably in the middle of the window.
+;; - Text body width can be the number of characters (an integer) or a
+;;   fraction of the window width (a float between 0.0 and 1.0).
+;; - Interactively change body width with `olivetti-expand`,
+;;   `olivetti-shrink` and `olivetti-set-width`.
+;; - Optionally hide the modeline for distraction-free writing.
 
 ;; Requirements
 ;; ------------
 
-;; - Emacs 24.1 (not tested on earlier versions, only tested on Mac OS X
-;;   and Linux, not tested on Windows).
+;; - Emacs 24.4
 
 ;; Installation
 ;; ------------
@@ -51,6 +47,9 @@
 ;; Olivetti is available through [MELPA][] and [MELPA-stable][]. I
 ;; encourage installing the stable version.
 
+;; Alternately, download the [latest release][] and put it in your
+;; `load-path`.
+
 ;; [melpa]: http://melpa.milkbox.net "MELPA"
 ;; [melpa-stable]: http://melpa-stable.milkbox.net "MELPA"
 ;; [latest release]: https://github.com/rnkn/olivetti/releases/latest 
"Olivetti latest release"