[Fsfe-uk] Proofreader/ Comments requested for animation script

[keith richards]

One of the projects I am working on at the moment is a
two/three minute animation that describes what happens
to a Software programmer who has to deal with software
patents. I'm collaborating on it with a professional
commercial animator (who is actually great) and its
coming along quite nicely *BUT* I have to soon record
the voiceover narration and I am now looking for
urgent feedback on the 'script'' : )

Its 10 points taking up about 2/3 of an A4 page, so
not huge, but I need some feedback. Please get in
touch if interested.

G


        
        
                
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