[Gnash-commit] gnash/doc/C/usermanual introduction.xml

[Melissa Goldin]

CVSROOT:        /sources/gnash
Module name:    gnash
Changes by:     Melissa Goldin <mushi>  07/08/16 14:21:09

Modified files:
        doc/C/usermanual: introduction.xml 

Log message:
        Moved a few pieces of information around, added more explanatory text.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/gnash/doc/C/usermanual/introduction.xml?cvsroot=gnash&r1=1.2&r2=1.3

Patches:
Index: introduction.xml
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RCS file: /sources/gnash/gnash/doc/C/usermanual/introduction.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -b -r1.2 -r1.3
--- introduction.xml    1 Aug 2007 04:59:35 -0000       1.2
+++ introduction.xml    16 Aug 2007 14:21:09 -0000      1.3
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
 <title>Audience</title>
 
 <para>
-This manual is primarily focused on developers interested in contributing to 
or building from the &app; project.  IT serves as a detailed reference guide, 
including a catalog and explanation of all options and features.  This level of 
detail may make this guide cumbersome for the average user, although advanced 
users may find it helpful.
+This manual is primarily focused on developers interested in contributing to 
or building from the &app; project.  It serves as a detailed reference guide, 
including a catalog and explanation of all options and features.  This level of 
detail may make this guide cumbersome for the average user, although advanced 
users may find it helpful.
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -71,15 +71,6 @@
 </para>
 </sect1>
 
-<sect1 id="Organization">
-<title>Organization of This Guide</title>
-
-<para>
-Written Last
-</para>
-
-</sect1>
-
 <sect1 id="guide-conventions">
 <title>Guide Conventions</title>
 
@@ -169,10 +160,10 @@
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 <varlistentry>
-<term><replaceable>[replaceable]</replaceable></term>
+<term><replaceable>&lt;replaceable&gt;</replaceable></term>
 <listitem>
 <para>
-Whenever a general term is included in an example as a placeholder, it will be 
signaled by this formatting.  This formatting will usually appear inside other 
formatting.  For example, 
<filename>/home/<replaceable>[username]</replaceable></filename> indicates the 
home directory of a user, whose actual username would be substituted in for 
<replaceable>[username]</replaceable>.
+Whenever a general term is included in an example as a placeholder, it will be 
signaled by this formatting.  This formatting will usually appear inside other 
formatting.  For example, 
<filename>/home/<replaceable>&lt;username&gt;</replaceable></filename> 
indicates the home directory of a user, whose actual username would be 
substituted in for <replaceable>&lt;username&gt;</replaceable>.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -188,19 +179,19 @@
 
 </sect1>
 
-<sect1 id="Acknowledgements">
-<title>Acknowledgements</title>
+<sect1 id="Acknowledgments">
+<title>Acknowledgments</title>
 
 <para>
-The first version of this guide was written by Rob Savoye.  If not for his 
tireless efforst, this book - and this project - would never have come this far.
+The first version of this guide was written by Rob Savoye.  If not for his 
tireless efforts, this book - and this project - would never have come this far.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-John Gilmore has also been dedicated to the project from the beginning. I have 
shamelessly plagiarized one of his early announcement emails in the early part 
of this chapter.
+John Steinhart has also been dedicated to the project from the beginning. I 
have shamelessly plagiarized one of his early announcement emails in the early 
part of this chapter.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Ann Barcomb was instrumental in taking this guide from the 0.3.0 to the 0.4.0 
version, incorporating the many changes that came wth &app; version 0.8.0.
+Ann Barcomb was instrumental in taking this guide from the 0.3.0 to the 0.4.0 
version, incorporating the many changes that came with &app; version 0.8.0.
 </para>
 
 <para>