Re: Proposed text for the announcement

[Davi Leal]

Warn about anything:
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From: GNU Herds work team <address@hidden>
Subject: [Announcement]: GNU Herds - Free Software Association

  http://www.gnuherds.org/


GNU Herds is a not-for-profit and true-democratic association which aims
to encourage the professional development of Free Software contributors.

Job Site modules have been developed to take in contact professionals and
companies interested in doing business.

The management of the Job Site is controlled by its own users using the
democratic policy.

Other modules can be developed under the association management.


Regards,
The work team



Antenore Gatta wrote:
> For me it's ok
>
> Just some few corrections, see below
>
> 2006/12/20, Davi Leal <address@hidden>:
> >
> > From: GNU Herds work team <address@hidden>
> > Subject: [Announcement]: GNU Herds - Free Software Association
> >
> >   http://www.gnuherds.org/
> >
> >
> > GNU Herds is a not-for-profit true-democratic association which aims to
> > encourage the professional development of Free Software contributors.
>
>
>  not-for-profit and true-democratic
>
> Job Site modules have been developed to take in contact people, companies,
> > etc. interested in doing business.
>
>
> It could be better to remove etc. and add something better...
> What about "professionals and companies" and no more?
>
> The management of the jobsite is controlled by its own users using the
> > democratic policy.
>
>
> Job Site*
>
> Other modules can be developed under the association management.
> >
> >
> > Regards,
> > The work team