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Re: [Gnumed-devel] Med-E-Tel 2013 Poster
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Nicolas Barbier |
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Re: [Gnumed-devel] Med-E-Tel 2013 Poster |
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Sun, 17 Mar 2013 09:58:18 +0100 |
2013/3/16 Eric Maeker <address@hidden>:
> http://ericmaeker.fr/FreeMedForms/medetel_2013.pdf
>
> Thanks for your review and comments.
“Actually, the DDI engine” → “Currently, the DDI engine”
<URL:http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/actually#Usage_notes>
“Some development is actually started” → “Some development is
currently underway” (or “has just been started” or so)
“during three different moments” → “at three different moments”
(because “during” indicates a period, while “moment” is instantaneous)
“to avoid competing conflicts”: What is a “competing conflict”?
Of less importance are:
“require a user validation to pass through.” → “require a user
validation to continue.” (because “to pass through” has a more
physical meaning in my mind)
“the DDI software of the project” → “the project’s DDI software” or
maybe “FreeMedForms’ prescription module”
Question: Does FreeMedForms use the same XML-based interface (as
GNUmed) to communicate with FreeDiams?
“implemented this interoperability.” → “implemented this interface.”
Great job of telling the important things in such a concise manner
(which I guess is the most important property of such a poster?).
Nicolas
--
A. Because it breaks the logical sequence of discussion.
Q. Why is top posting bad?