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Re: Включване в http://gnu.org/gnu/gnu-user-groups.html
From: |
Yavor Doganov |
Subject: |
Re: Включване в http://gnu.org/gnu/gnu-user-groups.html |
Date: |
Tue, 28 Jul 2009 17:00:20 +0300 |
В 14:16 +0300 на 27.07.2009 (пн), Ivaylo Valkov написа:
> Dear maintainer of the `GNU Users Groups ` list located at
> http://www.gnu.org/gnu/gnu-user-groups.html,
Няма такъв отговорник. user-groups е псевдоним на address@hidden,
където записват данните на групите заради някаква все още нереализирана
програма за членство във ФСС, след което прехвърлят билета на нас.
Най-добре разкарай цялото обръщение.
> Our group is a different form the Bulgarian users group at
s/a different form/very different from/
> There exits couple of variants of GNU - the most notable
> GNU/Linux (to our great regret known as `Linux`);
По принцип "couple" е чифт, макар че в разговорната реч се употребява и
като "няколко". Има и печатна грешка "exits". По-добре ми звучи така:
There are several variants of GNU -- the most popular GNU/Linux (much to
our regret more known as "Linux"); GNU/Herd and GNU/kFreeBSD.
> We refuse to call the system `Linux`, because there exists very important
> reasons
> not to do it.
s/exists/are/
BTW, кавичките в ASCII са `', не ``.
> We are gathered together by our affiliations to the Free Software Movement -
> our
Движението с малки букви.
> Our group exits to :
s/exits/exists/
Или махни "to" накрая, или махни "To" в началото от всяка точка от
списъка.
> - To help each other with advice, directions and other natural for computer
> community activities;
Липсва пълен член -- s/for computer/for the computer/.
> Everyone can join our group as long as he/she conforms certain rules.
s/conforms/agrees to follow/.
> We do not consider this as something wrong
Лошо е, но не е неетично. Предпочитам "We do not consider this as
something fundamentally wrong". Или "utterly".
> which is often convenient for them.
^more
За подсилване.
Липсват два абзаца:
If you feel in a similar way, send a request for membership to the
gug-bg project by visit your page "My Group Membership" and typing
"gug-bg" in the "Request For Inclusion" box. It is a good idea to write
a comment or even better -- send a message to the list with short
information about yourself.
The membership is formal; in practice the only "privileges" are the
right to edit the web pages and the possibility to assign tasks to you.
> The access to our mailing list is free.
Малко странно е това. "Everyone can subscribe to the mailing list"
избягва гадаенето какъв е този свободен и/или безплатен достъп.
> Please follow this rules when you communicate with other members of the list
> and
s/this/these/
> with everyone who ask for help in the mailing list:
s/ask/asks/ s/in/on/
> - Do not behave arrogantly with users, which do not have your profound
s/, which/who/
> knowledge in the subject.
s/in/of/
> When you have to explain in detail.
^,
Още по-добре е да обърнеш словореда.