10/11: gnu: go: Improve description.

[Tobias Geerinckx-Rice]

nckx pushed a commit to branch master
in repository guix.

commit 247064c3d141dec61706890221271fa32110b207
Author: Tobias Geerinckx-Rice <address@hidden>
Date:   Sun Jan 21 19:15:52 2018 +0100

    gnu: go: Improve description.
    
    * gnu/packages/golang.scm (go-1.4)[description]: Edit for clarity.
---
 gnu/packages/golang.scm | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/gnu/packages/golang.scm b/gnu/packages/golang.scm
index b80abed..202183f 100644
--- a/gnu/packages/golang.scm
+++ b/gnu/packages/golang.scm
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
 ;;; Copyright © 2016, 2017 Leo Famulari <address@hidden>
 ;;; Copyright © 2017 Sergei Trofimovich <address@hidden>
 ;;; Copyright © 2017 Alex Vong <address@hidden>
+;;; Copyright © 2018 Tobias Geerinckx-Rice <address@hidden>
 ;;;
 ;;; This file is part of GNU Guix.
 ;;;
@@ -196,10 +197,10 @@
     (home-page "https://golang.org/";)
     (synopsis "Compiler and libraries for Go, a statically-typed language")
     (description "Go, also commonly referred to as golang, is an imperative
-programming language.  Designed primarily for systems programming, it is a
-compiled, statically typed language in the tradition of C and C++, with
-garbage collection, various safety features and in the style of communicating
-sequential processes (CSP) concurrent programming features added.")
+programming language designed primarily for systems programming.  Go is a
+compiled, statically typed language in the tradition of C and C++, but adds
+garbage collection, various safety features, and concurrent programming 
features
+in the style of communicating sequential processes (@dfn{CSP}).")
     (supported-systems '("x86_64-linux" "i686-linux" "armhf-linux"))
     (license license:bsd-3)))