Re: [PATCH 03/19] gnu: Add r-dbi.

[Ricardo Wurmus]

Vicente Vera <address@hidden> writes:

> * gnu/packages/statistics.scm (r-dbi): New variable.

[...]

> +    (synopsis "R Database Interface")

Please use lower case here.

> +    (description
> +     "A database interface (DBI) definition for communication between R
> +and relational database management systems. All classes in this
> +package are virtual and need to be extended by the various R/DBMS
> +implementations.")

Please use two spaces after each sentence.  Also, please change the
beginning of the first sentence fragment so that it becomes a full
sentence.

E.g. s/A/The DBI package provides a/

~~ Ricardo