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Re: [PATCH] Add MARS shooter.


From: Eric Bavier
Subject: Re: [PATCH] Add MARS shooter.
Date: Sun, 20 Sep 2015 15:19:09 -0500

On Sun, 20 Sep 2015 17:49:44 +0200
Ricardo Wurmus <address@hidden> wrote:

> On IRC I was told that the description wasn’t quite as neutral as it
> should have been, so here’s another attempt:
> 
>        "M.A.R.S. is a 2D space shooter with pretty visual effects and
> attractive physics.  Players can battle each other or computer controlled
> enemies in different game modes such as space ball, death match, team death
> match, cannon keep, and grave-itation pit."
> 
> * “pretty visual effects” rather than “awesome visual effects”.
> * “attractive physics” — I could not think of a more appropriate term; it
>   surely is not “realistic”.
> * “exciting game modes” has become “different game modes such as ...”
> 
> What do you think?

This version seems more appropriate to me.  Thanks!

`~Eric



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