RE: Making the case for GNU Guix ... advice sought

[Cook, Malcolm]

Hi,

Thanks everyone for the many valuable suggestions and education.

Next week I intend to incorporate the suggested improvements as best I can and 
follow up with an edit that I will use in-house, and share back out via git-hub.

Though the document is aimed at my particular internal "project justification", 
I am trying to keep it generic, and will welcome suggestions for further 
reshaping it to be of more general value should there be such interest from 
y'all.

GoGuix,

Malcolm