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doc nitpicks: another pass
From: |
Jean-Charles Malahieude |
Subject: |
doc nitpicks: another pass |
Date: |
Mon, 14 Jul 2008 19:41:17 +0200 |
User-agent: |
Thunderbird 2.0.0.14 (X11/20080501) |
Hi Graham,
Two small things for today.
As a matter of fact, I would have liked that comments in the snippets or
examples included in the documentation have a better syntactic layout;
so to explain myself, we engage people, in French typography, to avoid
such phrasing as :
"I like my mother, we
love our granny."
and prefer :
"I like my mother,
we love our granny."
since it is not typeset on one single line.
I know, I'm quite boring, but... it is just like I hate singers
breathing and then cutting a word in the middle just because they are
"short on oxygen" (be cause is not because).
Cheers
Jean-Charles
>From a7e19c0605236fef04252d5d3a64f0a122fecc3a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jean-Charles Malahieude <lilyfan-AT-orange-DOT-fr>
Date: Mon, 14 Jul 2008 19:06:35 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Documentation nitpicks
layout of comments in snippets
hopefully last pass
---
Documentation/user/spacing.itely | 4 ++--
Documentation/user/tutorial.itely | 5 ++---
2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/user/spacing.itely b/Documentation/user/spacing.itely
index 0ac2174..feb46e1 100644
--- a/Documentation/user/spacing.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/spacing.itely
@@ -1437,8 +1437,8 @@ r2.
\once \override TextScript #'outside-staff-priority = #1
c4_"Text"\pp % this time the text will be closer to the staff
r2.
-% by setting outside-staff-priority to a non-number, we
-% disable the automatic collision avoidance
+% by setting outside-staff-priority to a non-number,
+% we disable the automatic collision avoidance
\once \override TextScript #'outside-staff-priority = ##f
\once \override DynamicLineSpanner #'outside-staff-priority = ##f
c4_"Text"\pp % now they will collide
diff --git a/Documentation/user/tutorial.itely
b/Documentation/user/tutorial.itely
index b1683d5..d0a95f5 100644
--- a/Documentation/user/tutorial.itely
+++ b/Documentation/user/tutorial.itely
@@ -500,9 +500,8 @@ comments:
c4 c g' g a a g2
address@hidden
- This line, and the notes below
- are ignored, since they are in a
- block comment.
+ This line, and the notes below are ignored,
+ since they are in a block comment.
f f e e d d c2
address@hidden
--
1.5.6.3
- doc nitpicks: another pass,
Jean-Charles Malahieude <=