Re: [PATCH:] Doc: adding palm mute to fretted-strings.itely

[Marc Hohl]

Marc Hohl schrieb:
> Graham Percival schrieb:
> [...]
> > Also, we generally try to keep the output down to one line.  Does the
> > second bar really add anything to the example?  Could you condense the
> > example down to 3 bars instead of 4?
> >  
I just send the patch once more as a remainder to shorten the example
without losing information.

Marc


>From fa06a8f82993386eca0c5c3b72e11c7c914beb70 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Marc Hohl <address@hidden>
Date: Thu, 8 Apr 2010 17:02:16 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Doc: shortened palm mute example

---
 Documentation/notation/fretted-strings.itely |    5 +----
 1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/notation/fretted-strings.itely 
b/Documentation/notation/fretted-strings.itely
index b89790f..601700d 100644
--- a/Documentation/notation/fretted-strings.itely
+++ b/Documentation/notation/fretted-strings.itely
@@ -1514,13 +1514,10 @@ triangle shape.
     \clef "G_8"
     \palmMuteOn
     e8^\markup { \musicglyph #"noteheads.u2do"  = palm mute }
-    e e
+    < e b' e > e
     \palmMuteOff
     e e  \palmMute e e e |
     e8 \palmMute { e e e } e e e e |
-    \palmMuteOn
-    < e b' e >8 e e e < e b' e >2
-    \palmMuteOff |
     < \palmMute e b' e >8 \palmMute { e e e } < \palmMute e b' e >2
   }
 }
-- 
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