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Re: Document <> and improve other simultanous music documentation. (issu
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dak |
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Re: Document <> and improve other simultanous music documentation. (issue 6248080) |
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Mon, 04 Jun 2012 15:24:20 +0000 |
We'll likely take months to get the documentation connected with this
delicate issue into a state where it would empower the gentle reader to
make an educated choice himself.
http://codereview.appspot.com/6248080/diff/23001/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely
File Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely (right):
http://codereview.appspot.com/6248080/diff/23001/Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely#newcode263
Documentation/notation/simultaneous.itely:263: rhythms; but attempts to
attach notes with different durations to
On 2012/06/04 14:50:54, Graham Percival wrote:
should be a comma here, not a semicolon.
Well, we have two separate complete sentences, and joined with a comma
the reader is easily confused into reading "attempts" as a verb, even
though admittedly it would be singular and thus not a complete match to
"the simultaneous sections".
To me this suggests using a semicolon (or reword everything, but then I
am lazy) in order to save the reader from backtracking.
Obviously, I'll let myself be overruled by native speakers if this
reasoning is considered wrong.
http://codereview.appspot.com/6248080/
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