Re: please review: font OFL relicensing

[Jan Nieuwenhuizen]

Jan Nieuwenhuizen writes:

> Han-Wen Nienhuys writes:
>
>> change is here https://codereview.appspot.com/6970046/
>
> +1
>
> One nitpick
>
> +    under the GPL+Font exception and the SIL Open Font License (OFL). A copy
> +    of the OFL is in the file LICENSE.OFL.
>
> There is an end of line space missing, but as the `A copy' sticks out
> beyond the right margin anyway, I would do it like this:
>
> +    under the GPL+Font exception and the SIL Open Font License (OFL).
> +    A copy of the OFL is in the file LICENSE.OFL.

One more nitpick

-% (at your option) any later version.
+% (at your option) any later version, or you can redistribute it under
+% the SIL Open Font License

-% (at your option) any later version.
+% (at your option) any later version, or under the SIL Open Font License
 %

Why the two different wordings?  I would suggest uniformity and pick
one, and in either case add a full stop at the end.

Jan

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