>From d888f94aeb3a65f42ad6610d3a971d901df31c97 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Urs Liska Date: Tue, 7 Jan 2014 12:51:02 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 5/5] Issue 3785:Web:Introduction: Reword "Our Goal" box The content of this box was somewhat confusing and inconsistent. See http://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/lilypond-devel/2014-01/msg00011.html This commit tries to incorporate the suggestions made in this thread as far as I considered appropriate. --- Documentation/web/introduction.itexi | 12 ++++++++---- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi b/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi index af0c9f7..9e7265c 100644 --- a/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi +++ b/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi @@ -20,10 +20,14 @@ soulless look of computer-printed sheet music. Musicians prefer reading beautiful music, so why couldn't programmers write software to produce elegant printed parts? -The result is a system which frees musicians from the details of -layout, allowing them to focus on making music. LilyPond works -with them to create publication-quality parts, crafted in the best -traditions of classical music engraving. +The result is a program that creates beautiful sheet music +following the best traditions of classical music engraving. +It takes care of the details of layout programmatically, +allowing composers, transcribers and publishers to focus +on the @emph{music} instead of improving their software's +default output. Performers will get parts that let them +concentrate on @emph{playing} music instead of @emph{reading} it. + @divEnd -- 1.7.10.4