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Re: Color and/or parenthesize single dots in fret-diagrams (issue 102450
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thomasmorley65 |
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Re: Color and/or parenthesize single dots in fret-diagrams (issue 102450043 by address@hidden) |
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Sun, 15 Jun 2014 11:18:55 +0000 |
On 2014/06/14 18:48:14, J_lowe wrote:
https://codereview.appspot.com/102450043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/fretted-strings.itely
File Documentation/notation/fretted-strings.itely (right):
https://codereview.appspot.com/102450043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/fretted-strings.itely#newcode1002
Documentation/notation/fretted-strings.itely:1002: color.
We need a new (obvious) paragraph for this new text I think, so give a
line
space after the previous one.
The syntax is a bit uncomfortable I think. Are they really just called
'dots'?
Here's my suggestion:
"Fingering indication dots can be colored as well as parenthesized;
the
parenthesis's color can also be altered independently."
The example will show the subtleties of 'inversion' and
'modification'.
done
I highly appreciate any suggestion to improve my wording, syntax and
grammar...
Sometimes I feel it's more difficult to write documentation than code.
https://codereview.appspot.com/102450043/