alternative endings

[David Koch]

I'm having a horrible time trying to finish off this song...  I need to
transpose it for use in a band.  This is just the melody line (I still
have to add lead chords and lyrics), but my second and third endings are
not coming out, and I haven't a clue why.
Anybody have a clue?

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\include "paper26.ly"
\score{
        \notes\relative c' {
                \time 4/4
                \key d \major
                r1 | r2 r8. a16 d cis d8~\repeat volta 3{
                d2 d8 e16 fis16 ~ fis g fis e | e8 d4. ~ d8. cis16 d cis
d8 ~ |
                d2 d8 e16 fis16 ~ fis g fis e | e2 ~ e8. a,16 d cis d8 ~
|
                d2 d8 d16 d ~ d a'8 a16 ~ | a16 fis8 fis16 ~ fis16 e8 d8
~ d2 ~ |
                d4 r8. d16 d8 e16 fis16 ~ fis16 g8 e16 ~ | e2 r8. a,16 d
cis d8 ~ |
                d2 d8 e16 fis ~ fis g fis e | e8 d4. r8. a16 d e d ~|
                d2 d8 d16 d ~ d a'8 a16 ~ | a2. r8 fis16 g16 |
                a16 a8 a16 ~ a a a8 ~ a4. a16 a | a8 g16 g ~ g fis8
fis16 ~ fis2 |
                r4 r8 d8 d e16 fis16 ~ fis16 d8 a'16 ~ |a2. r8 b8 |
                b8\segno b4 b4 a4 a8 ~ | a2. r8 fis8 | g4. a8 fis4. e8 |
e2. r8 g8 |
                g4. fis8 fis4 d8 a8 | a'4.( g16 )fis16 g4. g8 | g4. a8
fis4. e8 |
                e2. r8 b'8 | b8 b4 b4 a4 a8 ~ | a2. ~ a8 e16 fis16 | g4.
a8 fis4. e8 |
                e2 r8 e16 e e8 fis16 fis g4.()fis8 fis8. d16 d fis16 a8
| a2. r8 a8 |
                g4 a8 a8 ~ a4 d8 d8 ~ | }
                \alternative { { d2. r4 | r2 r8. a,16 d16 cis16 d8 ~ } {
d2. r8 b'8 }
                        { d2 r8 e16 e e8 fis16 g16 | g4.()fis8 fis8. d16
d8 fis16 a |
                        a2. r8 a8 | g4 a8 a ~ a4 d8 d8 ~ | d2. r4 } }
                }
        \paper { }
        \midi { }
}