1.5.2 Multiple voices=> Single-staff polyphony

[David Stocker]

Fransisco,

It looks good (your English is better than my Spanish!). I have only a 
few suggestions:

  1. In the last sentence of the paragraph following the first music
     example, change "voices move to avoid collisions." to "voices are
     automatically moved to avoid collisions."
  2. In the paragraph that begins "This syntax is simpler...", change
     "where it does not care" to "where it does not matter"
  3. In the paragraph that begins "In the special case...", change "it
     is advised" to "it is advisable"

Good job. I'm copying this to the list simply to let folks know I'm 
happy to look over English documentation for correct grammar. If anyone 
feels that he needs another pair of eyes to look over revisions to the 
documentation, then please feel free to run it by me. I am a relentless 
pursuer of clarity and correct grammar in my own writing. Since I am not 
a programmer, and only a beginner with LilyPond, then perhaps I can 
contribute to the project in this way (at least for now).

Peace,

David Stocker
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Francisco Vila wrote:
> 2008/8/18 Carl Sorensen <address@hidden>:
>   
> > Another option is to read the new discussion on polypohony from the
> > GDP docs:
> >
> > http://kainhofer.com/~lilypond/Documentation/index.html
> >
> > Go to the Notation Reference, and look up section 1.5.2.
> >     
>
> Speaking of, given that I rewrote this section last week, and that I
> have not launched it as public draft yet, and that I have not received
> any feedback on the first subsection Single-staff polyphony, could you
> take it a quick look and tell me if you think this is written in a
> grammatically correct-enough English? After that, I'll announce the
> draft with more bells and whistles.
>