Re: Score feedback request

[Simon Albrecht]

Hello Aura,

there’s one main thing I notice: the left hand has only one voice 
throughout, so you should better use \oneVoice instead of \voiceOne 
there. The same is for the last two bars of the right hand part.
For the piano staff, a separate Dynamics context between the two staves 
might be in place, only you’d need to separate Dynamics from pedalling 
indications, which should be below the left hand part.
Best regards,

Simon

Am 06.09.2014 um 10:09 schrieb Aura:
> Hello
>
> This question may be semi-off-topic. If you feel it is, let me know.
>
> I'm a blind music student learning to typeset my compositions with Lilypond.
>
> I would like to ask feedback from the community about one of my works (it is a
> Lied). I ask from Lilypond list for three reasons:
> * I can't (obviously) review the visual appearance of my score by myself.
> * If/when there are visual glitches in my score, people here can probably tell
> me how to fix them.
> * There are lots of professional musicians on this list whose opinions I value.
>
> My score and the rendered PDF file can be found at
> http://sange.fi/~aura/Lied/.
>
> The score is written with Finnish note names (they are the same as in Germany,
> so what in English-speaking countries is b, is h in my score). The source code
> also has comments written in Finnish, but they contain no valuable
> information.
>
> I'm especially worried about the way I have marked dynamics, because I don't
> know about the tradition regarding their positioning (should they be placed
> between the two piano staves or should they be marked separately for both 
> hands).
>
> My pianism is horrible, if you look at the score and spot something that is
> impossible or very difficult to play, you can tell my about it too.
>
> Thank you for your time.