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Re: Bug#268530: monit: Incorrect use of "it's" in package description


From: Martin Pala
Subject: Re: Bug#268530: monit: Incorrect use of "it's" in package description
Date: Sat, 28 Aug 2004 10:21:21 +0200
User-agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; U; Linux i686; en-US; rv:1.7.2) Gecko/20040820 Debian/1.7.2-4

Fixed in monit cvs ;)

Thanks for report,
Martin

Kevin B. McCarty wrote:
Package: monit
Version: 1:4.2.1-2
Severity: minor

Hello,

The package monit uses the contraction "it's" in the
Description field of its control file in what appears to be an
incorrect way.  Recall that "it's" is a contraction for "it is" or
"it has", and any other use (for instance, as a possessive) is not
grammatically correct English.  Hypothetical examples:

- XMMS is cool.  It's one of the best ...   [correct, "It is"]
- XMMS is cool.  It's been rated highly ... [correct, "It has"]
- XMMS is cool.  It's features include ...  [wrong]
- XMMS is cool.  Its features include ...   [correct, possessive]

Using "it's" and "its" correctly is in your best interest, since
incorrect usage may cause someone browsing the package descriptions to
have a bad first impression of that package.

Please note that this is a mass bug filing; it was discussed on
debian-devel in the thread starting here:

http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2004/08/msg01626.html

If you need to contact me, please respect the Reply-To header or use
my email address (in the .sig), as this bug report was sent from a
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