[Office-commits] r9712 - trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/articles

[sysadmin]

Author: www-data
Date: Fri Sep 25 12:27:33 2009
New Revision: 9712

Log:
web commit by mattl

Modified:
   trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/articles/monopoly.mdwn

Modified: trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/articles/monopoly.mdwn
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--- trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/articles/monopoly.mdwn Fri Sep 25 12:25:53 
2009        (r9711)
+++ trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/articles/monopoly.mdwn Fri Sep 25 12:27:33 
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@@ -17,9 +17,7 @@
 supposed to do is feel uncomfortable, and when he has bugs, suspect
 that the problem is DR-DOS and then go out to buy MS-DOS."
 
-More recently, news came that Amazon.co.uk is starting to make refunds
-on GNU/Linux netbook computers quickly and easily. Whether this will
-become a growing trend, who knows?
+More recently, news came that Amazon.co.uk is starting to make Windows refunds 
quick and easy for GNU/Linux users buying netbook computers. Whether this will 
become a growing trend, who knows?
 
 Worse, most PC manufacturers still do not offer you the opportunity to
 buy a machine without Windows.