[Office-commits] r9766 - trunk/campaigns

[sysadmin]

Author: www-data
Date: Mon Sep 28 16:51:23 2009
New Revision: 9766

Log:
web commit by tal82k

Modified:
   trunk/campaigns/interns.mdwn

Modified: trunk/campaigns/interns.mdwn
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--- trunk/campaigns/interns.mdwn        Mon Sep 28 16:50:31 2009        (r9765)
+++ trunk/campaigns/interns.mdwn        Mon Sep 28 16:51:23 2009        (r9766)
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 
 ###What is an operating system, and what difference does it make if it is free?
 
-##Analogies to understand to users of software freedom##
+##Analogies to help users understand software freedom##
 
 Imagine going out to buy a new car.  After deciding on a brand, you go to that 
dealer and start looking at what they have to offer.  You decide on a model you 
like, and the salesman tries to sell you on all sorts of things you don't need 
and some things that really you are not sure about.  Undercoating? Is that 
necessary?  You sign all sorts of contracts, and finally you can bring the car 
home.  A few months go by without a hitch, and you generally love that car.  
When driving one day, you hear some funny noises.  You have a friend who is 
really good with cars, so you ask if she can help you out.  When she sees your 
car, she tells you, "Nope.  Can't do anything for you.  This is one of those 
Anlibre cars.  I can't even open the hood."