[Office-commits] r9773 - trunk/campaigns/windows7sins

[sysadmin]

Author: www-data
Date: Tue Sep 29 12:17:31 2009
New Revision: 9773

Log:
web commit by peterb

Modified:
   trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/letter-ngo.mdwn

Modified: trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/letter-ngo.mdwn
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 ## Re: Important notice regarding impending lack of privacy, freedom and 
security from Microsoft Corporation.
 
-Dear _
-
-Re: Important notice regarding impending lack of privacy, freedom and
-security from Microsoft Corporation.
-
 As a decision maker within your organization, you undoubtedly strive to
 make choices that seek to improve the working lives of your employees,
-enhance the relationship you have with your stakeholders and potential
-customers and secure the independence and freedom for your organization
+enhance the relationship you have with your stakeholders and donors and secure 
the independence and freedom for your organization
 to achieve its mission.
 
 For many years, charities and not-for-profit organizations like yours