[Office-commits] r9794 - trunk/campaigns/pipeline

[sysadmin]

Author: www-data
Date: Tue Sep 29 15:17:44 2009
New Revision: 9794

Log:
web commit by holmes

Modified:
   trunk/campaigns/pipeline/videotestimonials.mdwn

Modified: trunk/campaigns/pipeline/videotestimonials.mdwn
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--- trunk/campaigns/pipeline/videotestimonials.mdwn     Tue Sep 29 15:15:14 
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+++ trunk/campaigns/pipeline/videotestimonials.mdwn     Tue Sep 29 15:17:44 
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@@ -70,15 +70,16 @@
 In 5 minutes, using a camcorder, digital camera, or webcam, you can create a 
video about why you or a friend love free software. Then submit your video and 
invite friends to do the same!
 
 Submission guidelines:
-****
+(link to submission guidelines page)
 
-At the Women in Free Software Summit and the Boston celebration of Software 
Freedom Day 2009, FSF volunteer <a 
href="http://curiousart.org/resume.html";>Dana Moser</a> roved the event asking 
participants the following questions, and making videos of the responses:
+At the Women in Free Software Summit and the Boston celebration of Software 
Freedom Day 2009, FSF volunteer Dana Moser roved the event asking participants 
the following questions, and making videos of the responses:
 
 * "What do you do with free software?"
 * "Why do you like free software?"
 * "Why is software freedom important to you?"
 
 Blog post with Dana's videos:
+(link to blog post)
 
 Direct links to the video files:
 
@@ -86,6 +87,9 @@
 * <http://static.fsf.org/nosvn/what_like_sm.ogv>
 * <http://static.fsf.org/nosvn/important_sm.ogv>
 
+More about Dana:
+* http://curiousart.org/resume.html
+
 We look forward to watching your contributions!
 
 Thanks,
@@ -115,7 +119,7 @@
 * "Why do you like free software?"
 * "Why is software freedom important to you?"
 
-The responses came out great (watch them below) but that's just the beginning. 
 We'd like you to [submit your own video], and invite friends to do the same!  
It only takes five minutes.  You can do it with your phone, your digital 
camera, or your webcam.  
+The responses came out great (watch them below) but that's just the beginning. 
 We'd like you to [submit your own video](link to submission guidelines page), 
and invite friends to do the same!  It only takes five minutes.  You can do it 
with your phone, your digital camera, or your webcam.  
 
 1. "What do you do with free software?"
 
@@ -144,7 +148,7 @@
 <param name="autoPlay" value="false"/> </applet>
 </video>
 
-These came out great, didn't they?  Take 5 minutes to [submit one of your 
own]().  
+These came out great, didn't they?  Take 5 minutes to [submit one of your 
own](link to submission guidelines page).  
 
 Thanks to everyone who participated in the "beta" videos: