[Office-commits] r10032 - trunk/campaigns/windows7sins

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Author: www-data
Date: Tue Oct  6 17:05:25 2009
New Revision: 10032

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web commit by peterb

Modified:
   trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/pr-ngo-email.mdwn

Modified: trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/pr-ngo-email.mdwn
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--- trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/pr-ngo-email.mdwn      Tue Oct  6 17:01:32 
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-You previously covered the launch of our 'Windows 7 Sins' campaign, in which we
-asked the Fortune 500 companies (except Microsoft) to stop using
-proprietary software from Microsoft, Apple and Adobe and switch to
-GNU/Linux:
+Breaking the dependency on proprietary software: A call to nonprofits to 
refuse Microsoft Windows 7
 
-http://en.windows7sins.org/
-
-Tomorrow, we're sending the second wave of letters, making the case
-against Microsoft and proprietary software by writing to 500 leaders
+Tomorrow, we're sending out 500 letters to the leaders
 of the most influential charities and nongovernmental organizations (NGOs) 
worldwide,
 asking them to make the switch to freedom-respecting free software,
-and to help foster awareness of the ethical importance of computer
+in an effort to foster awareness of the ethical importance of computer
 user freedom.
 
+http://en.windows7sins.org/
+
 Below is the press release under embargo until tomorrow October 7th, along 
with the text of the letter. If you'd like to have any additional information 
about the large response we've had to the campaign, or would like to do an 
interview or need additional quotes please contact us.
 
 Press contacts: