Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] docs: describe the QEMU build system structure / design

[Laszlo Ersek]

meta review of your review:

On 09/22/15 20:11, John Snow wrote:
> Reviewed from an en_US perspective, though I left alone things that are
> clearly regional (e.g. 'behaviour' vs 'behavior')
> 
> On 09/22/2015 12:35 PM, Daniel P. Berrange wrote:

>> + - Add information to the help output message to report on the new
>> +   feature flag.
>> +
> 
> Remove period, or add to the other list items for consistency. My
> personal preference is to use the period for any sentences with proper
> grammatical structure, omitting it for simple list items.

Then:

>> +which create binaries must include the $(EXESUF) variable on the binary
>> +name. eg
> 
> 'e.g.' here and everywhere subsequent.

Self-contradiction found!!!1111eleven

:)

Honestly I'm surprised (or not) how many typos you've found that I
blissfully slid over.

>> +Each system/userspace emulation target needs to have a slightly
>> +different set of make rules / variables. Thus, make will be recursively
>> +invoked for each of the emulation targets.
>> +
>> +The recursive invokation will end up processing the toplevel
> 
> invocation again.

Self-contradictory period again! :)

> Thanks for writing this!

Yes!

> Pretending to be Eric,

Yes. :)

Cheers
Laszlo