Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH v3 03/12] dump-guest-memory: using static DumpState, add DumpStatus

[Eric Blake]

On 11/30/2015 04:32 AM, Peter Xu wrote:
> Instead of malloc/free each time for DumpState, make it
> static. Added DumpStatus to show status for dump.
> 
> This is to be used for detach dump.

s/detach/detached/

> 
> Signed-off-by: Peter Xu <address@hidden>
> ---
>  dump.c                | 30 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++---
>  include/sysemu/dump.h |  2 ++
>  qapi-schema.json      | 18 ++++++++++++++++++
>  3 files changed, 47 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
> 

In addition to Paolo's review,

> +++ b/qapi-schema.json
> @@ -2139,6 +2139,24 @@
>              '*format': 'DumpGuestMemoryFormat'} }
>  
>  ##
> +# @DumpStatus
> +#
> +# Define the status for dump guest memory.

Reads awkwardly.  Maybe:

Describe the status of a long-running background guest memory dump.

> +#
> +# @none: not started any dump-guest-memory yet.

@none: no dump-guest-memory has started yet

> +#
> +# @active: there is one dump running in background.
> +#
> +# @completed: the last dump has finished sucessfully

s/sucessfully/successfully/

Inconsistent on whether your lines end in '.'

> +#
> +# @failed: the last dump has failed.
> +#
> +# Since 2.6
> +##
> +{ 'enum': 'DumpStatus',
> +  'data': [ 'none', 'active', 'completed', 'failed' ] }
> +
> +##
>  # @DumpGuestMemoryCapability:
>  #
>  # A list of the available formats for dump-guest-memory
> 

-- 
Eric Blake   eblake redhat com    +1-919-301-3266
Libvirt virtualization library http://libvirt.org

signature.asc
Description: OpenPGP digital signature