Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] docs: Grammar and spelling fixes

[Eric Blake]

On 06/11/2018 03:25 PM, Ville Skyttä wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Ville Skyttä <address@hidden>
> ---

> +++ b/docs/config/mach-virt-graphical.cfg
> @@ -185,7 +185,7 @@
>   # attached to it.
>   #
>   # We also create an optical disk, mostly for installation
> -# purposes: once the guest OS has been succesfully
> +# purposes: once the guest OS has been successfully

Looks like this line was copy-and-pasted a few times :)

> +++ b/docs/interop/qcow2.txt
> @@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ in the image file.
>   It contains pointers to the second level structures which are called refcount
>   blocks and are exactly one cluster in size.
>   
> -Given a offset into the image file, the refcount of its cluster can be obtained
> +Given an offset into the image file, the refcount of its cluster can be 
> obtained
>   as follows:

This line is now long; it might be better if you reflow 'obtained', more 
like...

>   
>       refcount_block_entries = (cluster_size * 8 / refcount_bits)
> @@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ The L1 table has a variable size (stored in the header) and 
> may use multiple
>   clusters, however it must be contiguous in the image file. L2 tables are
>   exactly one cluster in size.
>   
> -Given a offset into the virtual disk, the offset into the image file can be
> +Given an offset into the virtual disk, the offset into the image file can be
>   obtained as follows:

...this line.

With or without the reflow,
Reviewed-by: Eric Blake <address@hidden>

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