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Re: [Qemu-trivial] [Qemu-devel] [PATCH v3] misc: Spelling and grammar fi
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Eric Blake |
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Re: [Qemu-trivial] [Qemu-devel] [PATCH v3] misc: Spelling and grammar fixes in comments |
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Fri, 11 Oct 2013 14:09:25 -0600 |
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On 10/11/2013 02:03 PM, Don Koch wrote:
>> In this method, H/L and X0/X1 is always same position.
>> - This lead us to more speed and less memory.
>> + This leads us to more speed and less memory.
>> Of cause, the result of both method is quite same
>> because it's only difference that coefficient position.
>> */
>>
>
> Since you're in the neighborhood, this paragraph needs more fixes:
>
> In this method, H/L and X0/X1 is always in the same position.
> This leads us to more speed and less memory.
> Of course, the result of both methods is the same
> because the only difference is the coefficient position.
Broken record. This was what was attempted in v1, where the argument
was that the original wording is so obtuse that it is not obvious that
this is the correct replacement.
I actually like the approach of v2.
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Eric Blake eblake redhat com +1-919-301-3266
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Re: [Qemu-trivial] [Qemu-devel] [PATCH v3] misc: Spelling and grammar fixes in comments, Peter Maydell, 2013/10/11
Re: [Qemu-trivial] [PATCH v3] misc: Spelling and grammar fixes in comments, Michael Tokarev, 2013/10/26