[Savannah-cvs] administration/infra/elisp savannah.el

[John Darrington]

CVSROOT:        /sources/administration
Module name:    administration
Changes by:     John Darrington <jmd>   07/10/01 04:05:20

Modified files:
        infra/elisp    : savannah.el 

Log message:
        Minor grammatical and spelling corrections.  Closes Task #7337.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/administration/infra/elisp/savannah.el?cvsroot=administration&r1=1.59&r2=1.60

Patches:
Index: savannah.el
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RCS file: /sources/administration/administration/infra/elisp/savannah.el,v
retrieving revision 1.59
retrieving revision 1.60
diff -u -b -r1.59 -r1.60
--- savannah.el 17 Sep 2007 18:06:03 -0000      1.59
+++ savannah.el 1 Oct 2007 04:05:20 -0000       1.60
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
 ;;   sv-approve-without-source-code in sv-problem-without-source-code and
 ;;   add comments on sv-problem-copyright-holder
 ;;
-;; $Id: savannah.el,v 1.59 2007/09/17 18:06:03 snoogie Exp $
+;; $Id: savannah.el,v 1.60 2007/10/01 04:05:20 jmd Exp $
 
 ;;
 ;; General
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@
   ""
   (insert "If you are willing to make the changes mentioned above, please 
provide us with an URL to an updated tarball of your project.  Upon review, we 
will reconsider your project for inclusion in Savannah.
 
-To help us better keep track of your registration, please use the tracker's 
web interface following the link below. Do not reply directly, the registration 
process is not driven by e-mail, and we will not receive such replies.
+To help us better keep track of your registration, please use the tracker's 
web interface by following the link below. Do not reply directly; the 
registration process is not driven by e-mail, and we will not receive such 
replies.
 
 Regards.\n")
   (message "Inserted sv-closing-reply text.")
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@
 (defun sv-problem-details ()
   (interactive)
   ""
-  (insert "We need a detailed technical description that specifies such 
requirements as programming languages and external libraries.  It should be at 
least one-half a page.\n\n")
+  (insert "We need a detailed technical description that specifies 
requirements such as programming languages and external libraries.  It should 
be at least one-half a page.\n\n")
   (message "Inserted sv-problem-details text.")
   )
 
@@ -389,7 +389,7 @@
 (defun sv-problem-uses-gnu-type ()
   (interactive)
   ""
-  (insert "Your project is not part of the GNU project, so we cannot accept 
its current type.  We want to maintain the distinction between 'GNU' 
and'non-GNU' projects.  If your project is approved for inclusion into 
Savannah, we will set it's type to 'non-GNU'.
+  (insert "Your project is not part of the GNU project, so we cannot accept 
its current type.  We want to maintain the distinction between 'GNU' 
and'non-GNU' projects.  If your project is approved for inclusion into 
Savannah, we will set its type to 'non-GNU'.
 
 If your project is accepted into the GNU project you may change its type.  You 
can do this by asking us.\n\n")
   (message "Inserted sv-problem-uses-gnu-type text.")
@@ -499,7 +499,7 @@
 
 Your projects meets the Savannah requirements, except that we cannot review 
your source code yet.
 
-We prefer to approve project with source code, so we can check it for legal 
issues (even non-functional code is OK). We will among others check if the 
source files contain appropriate copyright notice and permission-to-copy 
statements at the beginning of every copyrightable file. Our review helps catch 
potential legal issues early.
+Before approval, we prefer to see your source code, so we can check it for 
legal issues (even non-functional code is OK). Among other checks, we will 
check that the source files contain appropriate copyright notices and 
permission-to-copy statements at the beginning of every copyrightable file. Our 
review helps catch potential legal issues early.
 
 If you need Savannah right now, please explain to us why; otherwise, please 
resubmit the project when you have source code.
 
@@ -524,7 +524,8 @@
   (insert "Even though your project is Free Software it can not be hosted here.
 We only host projects that can run on a free operating system \(such as 
GNU/Linux\).
 
-We have adopted this policy because now that completely free operating systems 
exist, we do not want to encourage users of those systems to start using 
proprietary operating systems so that they can use your program.
+Today,  completely free operating systems exist, and we have adopted this 
policy because
+we do not want to encourage users  to switch to  proprietary operating systems 
in order to use your program.
 
 If you are willing to maintain a version for free operating systems, which 
work as well as or better than other ports, you can then provide versions for 
non-free systems as well. The idea is that at no point should only-free users 
be at a disadvantage compared to users of proprietary software.
 
@@ -652,7 +653,7 @@
 
 We are careful about ethical issues and insist on producing software that is 
not dependent on proprietary software.
 
-While Open Source as defined by its founders means something pretty close to 
Free Software, it's frequently misunderstood.  For more information, please see 
http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-software-for-freedom.html.\n\n";)
+While Open Source, as defined by its founders, means something pretty close to 
Free Software, it's frequently misunderstood.  For more information, please see 
http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-software-for-freedom.html.\n\n";)
   (message "Inserted sv-confusion-open-and-free text.")
   )
 
@@ -709,7 +710,7 @@
 
 (defun sv-problem-usage ()
   (interactive)
-  (insert "Savannah is meant to help developers organize a team and produce 
code. This mean we provide resources to projects so they can actually manage 
their project, and we do not host a download area only.
+  (insert "Savannah is meant to help developers organize a team and produce 
code. This means we provide resources to projects so they can actually manage 
their project, and we do not host a download area only.
 
 I mention this because I saw you already have (among others) a ***FIX_ME*** 
account. Can you tell me how you plan to use Savannah?")
   (message "Inserted sv-problem-usage text.")