[Savannah-cvs] administration/content/gnu-content/register req...

[Karl Berry]

CVSROOT:        /web/administration
Module name:    administration
Changes by:     Karl Berry <karl>       11/08/19 16:29:19

Modified files:
        content/gnu-content/register: requirements.txt 

Log message:
        mention that we mean the latest released FDL; downcase terms per rms

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/administration/content/gnu-content/register/requirements.txt?cvsroot=administration&r1=1.12&r2=1.13

Patches:
Index: requirements.txt
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RCS file: 
/web/administration/administration/content/gnu-content/register/requirements.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -b -r1.12 -r1.13
--- requirements.txt    3 Oct 2006 19:28:53 -0000       1.12
+++ requirements.txt    19 Aug 2011 16:29:19 -0000      1.13
@@ -15,10 +15,10 @@
 
 <p>
 The space given to you on this server is given for the expressed
-purpose of advancing Free Software that can run in Free Operating Systems,
-documenting that kind of software or creating Free educational textbooks.
+purpose of advancing free software that can run in free operating systems,
+documenting that kind of software or creating free educational textbooks.
 Using it to host or advertise non-free software is considered harmful to
-Free Software. For more information, please read the <a
+free software. For more information, please read the <a
 href=http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/philosophy.html target="_blank">Philosophy
 of the GNU Project</a>.
 </p>
@@ -69,13 +69,13 @@
 <p>
 In general, you may not advertise anything commercial on a site hosted
 here.  However, as exceptions, you can point people to commercial
-support offerings for your Free Software project, and you can mention
-fan items about your Free Software project that you sell directly to
+support offerings for your free software project, and you can mention
+fan items about your free software project that you sell directly to
 the users.
 </p>
 
 
-<h3>Speaking about Free Software</h3>
+<h3>Speaking about free software</h3>
 
 <p>
 Savannah is a free software hosting site: we host projects such as
@@ -101,10 +101,10 @@
 </p>
 
 
-<h3>Free Software Licenses</h3>
+<h3>Free software licenses</h3>
 
 <p>
-You will be presented with a choice of Free Software licenses for your
+You will be presented with a choice of free software licenses for your
 project.  For hosting on Savannah, you must use one of these licenses.
 You will be the copyright holder of the text you write for your
 project, but these licenses give the freedom to anyone to use, study,
@@ -113,11 +113,13 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-For manuals, we allow only GNU FDL version X or later, or other
+For manuals, we allow only GNU FDL version X or later, where X is the
+latest released version of the <a
+href="http://www.gnu.org/licenses/fdl.html";>FDL</a>, or other
 licensing which is compatible with that.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-If you wish to use another license that is not listed, let us know
+If you need to use another license that is not listed, let us know
 and we will review these requests on a case-by-case basis. 
 </p>