master 9a352ab1c7: ; * etc/NEWS: Fix wording of a recently added entry.

[Eli Zaretskii]

branch: master
commit 9a352ab1c735e12574dae678f13c41f8d50fb92c
Author: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
Commit: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>

    ; * etc/NEWS: Fix wording of a recently added entry.
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 etc/NEWS | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/etc/NEWS b/etc/NEWS
index e6b90365e3..d17e1f1f89 100644
--- a/etc/NEWS
+++ b/etc/NEWS
@@ -35,11 +35,11 @@ This means it should be less necessary to disable the likes 
of
 `select-active-regions' when Emacs is running over a slow network
 connection.
 
-** Emacs will now redisplay frames that are made visible by a compositor.
-This means even if `frame-visible-p' returns nil or `icon', the frame
-will be redisplayed if it is being displayed to the user by the
-compositing manager, which can happenas part of a preview for
-iconified windows.
+** Emacs now updates invisible frames that are made visible by a compositor.
+If an invisible or an iconified frame is shown to the user by the
+compositing manager, Emacs will now redisplay such a frame even though
+'frame-visible-' returns nil or 'icon' for it.  This can happen, for
+example, as part of preview for iconified frames.
 
 
 * Editing Changes in Emacs 30.1