Ian Barton <address@hidden> writes:
Carsten Dominik wrote:
One more: How about this one:
For question two I currently have:
We should win because by letting people shape their
productive selves, org-mode has spawned the best
community of life hackers in the world.
Just now I thought of
We should win because Org-mode truely changes the way how it's
users
do everything, and has spawned the best community of life hackers
in the world.
- Carsten
Grammatical nit picking:
We should win because Org-mode changes the way its users do
everything
and has spawned the world's best community of life hackers.
I'd vote against restating the category title ("Most Likely to Change
the Way You Do Everything") in the first half of the sentence. It is
slightly better with Carsten's "truly", but still kind of begs the
question. So I'd say stay with the original version (with a slight
preference for 'evolve' over 'shape'.)