[Gforge-commits] gforge/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/getting_started getting_started.xml, 1.2, 1.3

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Update of /cvsroot/gforge/gforge/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/getting_started
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Modified Files:
        getting_started.xml 
Log Message:
Fixed a lot of typos and updated some outdated information


Index: getting_started.xml
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RCS file: 
/cvsroot/gforge/gforge/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/getting_started/getting_started.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -d -r1.2 -r1.3
--- getting_started.xml 16 Mar 2004 10:03:47 -0000      1.2
+++ getting_started.xml 16 Mar 2004 18:50:20 -0000      1.3
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
        <section>
                <title>GForge homepage</title>
                <para>
-                       Connect with your browser to GForge. This can be either 
<ulink url="http://gforge.org";>gforge.org</ulink> or a locally-installed 
version of the software.
+                       Connect with your browser to GForge. This can be either 
<ulink url="http://gforge.org";>http://gforge.org</ulink> or a locally-installed 
version of the software.
                </para>
        </section>
        <section>
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
                                <term>Login Name</term>
                                <listitem>
                                        <para>
-                                               You should select an unique 
user name to access to the system. The name should not contain uppercase 
letters and usually is a combination of your name and your surname; e.g. juser 
for John User.  Also, the user name cannot match that of an existing system 
user account - i.e., you can't have a GForge user named 'root'.
+                                               You should select an unique 
user name to access to the system. The name should not contain uppercase 
letters and usually is a combination of your name and your surname; e.g. jdoe 
for John Doe.  Also, the user name cannot match that of an existing system user 
account - i.e., you can't have a GForge user named 'root'.
                                        </para>
                                </listitem>
                        </varlistentry>
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
                        <varlistentry>
                                <term>Language Choice</term>
                                <listitem>
-                                       <para>Select here your preferred 
language. This choice does not influence only the language in which gforge will 
speak to you, but also some local specific data display, like dates, etc.</para>
+                                       <para>Select here your preferred 
language. This choice does not influence only the language in which GForge will 
speak to you, but also some local specific data display, like dates, etc.</para>
                                </listitem>
                        </varlistentry>
                        <varlistentry>
@@ -54,14 +54,14 @@
                                <term>Email Address</term>
                                <listitem>
                                        <para>You should insert your email 
address here.</para>
-                                       <para>The email address should be 
correct, gforge will send you a confirmation email for your subscription. If 
the email address you're inserting here is wrong, you'll never receive the 
confirmation email and the account you're registering will never be 
activated.</para>
-                                       <para>When you receive the confirmation 
email, you must connect to gforge using the provided URL in the email. This is 
the only way to become a registered user.</para>
+                                       <para>The email address should be 
correct, GForge will send you a confirmation email for your subscription. If 
the email address you're inserting here is wrong, you'll never receive the 
confirmation email and the account you're registering will never be 
activated.</para>
+                                       <para>When you receive the confirmation 
email, you must connect to GForge using the provided URL in the email. This is 
the only way to become a registered user.</para>
                                </listitem>
                        </varlistentry>
                        <varlistentry>
                                <term>Receive Email about Site Updates</term>
                                <listitem>
-                                       <para>If you check this, you'll 
periodically receive information about the gforge site. The traffic is very 
low, it is recommended that you activate this option.</para>
+                                       <para>If you check this, you'll 
periodically receive information about the GForge site. The traffic is very 
low, it is recommended that you activate this option.</para>
                                </listitem>
                        </varlistentry>
                        <varlistentry>
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
        </section>
        <section>
                <title>Registering a new project</title>
-               <para>To register a new project, connect to your gforge and add 
the register/path to the URL</para>
+               <para>To register a new project, connect to your GForge , login 
and go to My Page section. You have a Register Project link in the menu at the 
top of the page.</para>
                <para>You need to insert the following information to register 
a project:</para>
                <variablelist>
                        <varlistentry>
@@ -111,23 +111,23 @@
                                                <listitem><para>it must be in 
lowercase</para></listitem>
                                                <listitem><para>only 
characters, numbers and dashes are accepted</para></listitem> 
                                        </orderedlist>
-                                       <para>The unix name will be used for 
your website, the CVS Repository and the shell access for gforge.</para>
+                                       <para>The unix name will be used for 
your website, the CVS Repository and the shell access for GForge.</para>
                                        <note>
                                                <para>the unix name will never 
change. Once a project is set up with its unix name, the name cannot be 
changed.</para>
                                        </note>
                                </listitem>
                        </varlistentry>
                </variablelist>
-               <para>Click on the I agree button to register the project. Your 
project is now registered on gforge; but you cannot yet access it. It has to be 
approved from the site administrators.</para>
-               <para>When the project is approved, you'll receive an email 
from gforge confirming that the project is active.</para>
+               <para>Click on the I agree button to register the project. Your 
project is now registered on GForge; but you cannot yet access it. It has to be 
approved from the site administrators.</para>
+               <para>When the project is approved, you'll receive an email 
from GForge confirming that the project is active.</para>
        </section>
        <section id="ug_getting_started_login">
                <title>Login</title>
-               <para>You can login by clicking the Login image in the 
top-right border of the browser window.</para>
+               <para>You can login by clicking the Login link in the top-right 
border of the browser window.</para>
                <para>The form requires that you insert your username and your 
password to access the site. If the data is correct, the user homepage will be 
displayed.</para>
        </section>
        <section>
                <title>Logout</title>
-               <para>To log out from gforge, click on the Logout button on the 
top right of your browser window.</para>
+               <para>To log out from GForge, click on the Logout link on the 
top right of your browser window.</para>
        </section>
-</section>
+</section>
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