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Re: [Gnewsense-dev] About gNewSense Draft document
From: |
Luis Felipe Lopez Acevedo |
Subject: |
Re: [Gnewsense-dev] About gNewSense Draft document |
Date: |
Fri, 11 Sep 2009 15:32:32 -0500 |
El vie, 11-09-2009 a las 11:44 +0200, Sam Geeraerts escribió:
> Luis Felipe Lopez Acevedo schreef:
> > Hello all,
> >
> > I wrote a draft of the document about gNewSense that is part of the
> > documentation team projects[1] and I'd like to ask if you could revise
> > it and comment about it.
>
Thanks for the feedback, Sam.
> * Introduction:
> - "find out what gNewSense is"
>
> * What is gNewSense:
> - The screenshots image is a bit big. I need to use all of my 1024
> pixels in screen width to not have the image overlap the table of
> contents. Wouldn't one of the screenshots suffice?
Right, I'll change that.
> - I feel a bit uneasy about mentioning Windows and the likes, although
> you make it clear that they are non-free. It helps some people to get
> the idea of what an operating system is. But when they read this, they
> would've already booted into gNewSense, so I'd guess that they would
> already see that it's similar to Windows.
Well, the idea is to have this information in the wiki too, so people
could be reading in a Web browser, in other operating system. I really
don't see any harm in mentioning those names.
> * Why Free Software
> - Including the article is a good idea. But note that it's licensed
> under GFDL no invariants, which is incompatible with CC-0 of the entire
> document.
>
Then I'll use the same licenses we use for the content in the wiki.
> Thanks for writing this, keep up the great work. Sorry for not
> responding sooner, I wanted to be thourough rather then quick.
>
Thank you.