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     new 6d49452  simplify language
     new 991bb6a  clarify IANA number ranges

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Summary of changes:
 draft-schanzen-gns.xml | 15 +++++++--------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
index b791936..d47ae9c 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-gns.xml
@@ -326,9 +326,8 @@
    <section anchor="overview" numbered="true" toc="default">
      <name>Overview</name>
      <t>
-       In GNS, any user can create and manage one or more cryptographically
-       secured zones (<xref target="zones"/>) as part of a zone master
-       implementation.
+       In GNS, any user can create and manage one or more zones
+       (<xref target="zones"/>) as part of a zone master implementation.
        Zones are uniquely identified by a zone key.
        Zone contents are signed using blinded private keys and
        encrypted using derived secret keys.
@@ -348,7 +347,7 @@
      </t>
      <t>
        Zone contents are encrypted and signed
-       before being published in a distributed key-value storage (<xref 
target="publish"/>)
+       before being published in a key-value storage (<xref target="publish"/>)
        as illustrated in <xref target="figure_arch_publish"/>.
        In this process, unique zone identification is hidden from the network
        through the use of key blinding.
@@ -932,8 +931,8 @@ zTLD[126..129].zTLD[63..125].zTLD[0..62]
          type as defined in <xref target="RFC1035" /> or any of the
          complementary standardized DNS resource record types. This value must 
be
          stored in network byte order. Note that values
-         below 2^16 are reserved for allocation via IANA <xref 
target="RFC6895" />,
-         while values above 2^16 are allocated by the
+         below 2^16 are reserved for 16-bit DNS Resorce Record types allocated 
by IANA <xref target="RFC6895" />.
+         Values above 2^16 are allocated by the
          GNUnet Assigned Numbers Authority <xref target="GANA" />.
        </dd>
        <dt>DATA</dt>
@@ -1659,8 +1658,8 @@ S-Decrypt(zk,label,expiration,ciphertext):
          <dd>
            the 16-bit protocol number, e.g. 6 for TCP.
            Note that values
-           below 2^8 are reserved for allocation via IANA <xref 
target="RFC5237" />,
-           while values above 2^8 are allocated by the
+           below 2^8 are reserved for 8-bit Internet Protocol numbers 
allocated by IANA <xref target="RFC5237" />.
+           Values above 2^8 are allocated by the
            GNUnet Assigned Numbers Authority <xref target="GANA" />.
            In network byte order.
          </dd>

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