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commit fa557ed59abd71a3ed3893a7b9c2f4b70492d3f4
Author: MS <ms@taler.net>
AuthorDate: Tue Jul 11 14:49:31 2023 +0200

    EBICS 3 tutorial: proof reading
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@@ -30,20 +30,24 @@ set the language and for box #2 to get the page that offers 
to register.
 
 After a successful registration, an IBAN needs to be associated with
 the user just created.  Likely after the first login, the following
-page should appear (if not, simply click on box #1).  Click then on box #2.
+page should appear.  Click then on box #2.
 
-.. image:: IBAN-setting-page.png
+.. note::
+
+  The navigation bar in the following screenshot is ubiquitous,
+  so click on box #1 if the depicted page did not show up automatically.
+
+.. image:: no-accounts.png
 
 If the following page appears, please obtain a checksum-valid but fictitious
-Swiss IBAN and enter it as indicated by box #1 in the following screenshot, and
-then save it (box #2).
+Swiss IBAN and enter it as indicated by box #1 and then save it (box #2).
 
 .. _my-iban:
 
 .. image:: set-IBAN.png
 
-If the bank responds with a successful message, proceed with the following
-settings: EBICS 3, and the format of payment confirmations.
+If the bank responds with a successful message, proceed by enabling
+EBICS 3 and setting the format of the ISO20022 documents.
 
 .. note::
 
@@ -53,10 +57,6 @@ settings: EBICS 3, and the format of payment confirmations.
 To use EBICS 3, click the navigation bar item highlighted in the
 following screenshot.
 
-.. note::
-
-  Such navigation bar is visible from any page in the test platform.
-
 .. image:: set-ISO-2019-0.png
 
 The following page should appear, where the ISO format can be specified
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ as it is depicted in the following screenshot.
 
 .. image:: set-ISO-2019-1.png
 
-After having saved the setting, proceed now to set the (sub-)format
+After having saved the setting, proceed now to set the flavor 
 of payment confirmations.  This setting instructs the bank to define
 particular XML nodes when it releases the payment confirmations.  Even
 if each document is ISO20022, this step is essential because ISO20022
@@ -89,15 +89,15 @@ EBICS user and partner IDs.  Hover on box #1 and then click 
on box #2.
 
 .. image:: get-EBICS-IDs-0.png
 
-At the first access, the following page should appear.  Simply enable
-EBICS and continue to the next step.
+At the first access, the following page should appear.  Simply create
+EBICS access and continue to the next step.
 
 .. image:: enable-EBICS.png
 
 After having obtained the following page, finally the EBICS identifiers
-are shown in box #1.  These values are the parameters to the test runner.
-**Note**: the terms 'customer' and 'partner' are used as **synonyms** in this
-tutorial (and in the EBICS specifications too).
+are shown in box #1.  The test runner needs them.  **Note**: the terms
+'customer' and 'partner' are used as **synonyms** in this tutorial (and
+in the EBICS specifications too).
 
 .. image:: get-EBICS-IDs-1.png
 
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