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Re: dmd: Some improvements to the dmd manual
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Ludovic Courtès |
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Re: dmd: Some improvements to the dmd manual |
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Thu, 23 Jan 2014 14:11:42 +0100 |
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Hi!
Alex Sassmannshausen <address@hidden> skribis:
> I'm assuming that dmd contributions go to the guix list for now.
Yep.
> Attached a patch introducing some changes to the dmd manual — the
> patch only covers the Introduction section for now as I wanted to
> submit something with my approach early to know whether it is
> acceptable.
>
> As you can see it's a bit of a rewrite, but I think the English is
> overall easier to understand.
Yes, that makes sense.
> Let me know if you think I should ba approaching this differently.
I will comment on the first patch, but what specific points do you want
to address more generally? Is it more about wording, structure, guiding
the user? (I can see some of that in the first patch.)
Thank you!
Ludo’.
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