Re: Fix grammar and markup (was Re: Feedback of the GNU Guix manual)

[Matt]

 ---- On Fri, 19 Apr 2024 22:56:13 +0200  pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)  wrote --- 
 > Hello Matt, pushed as 86fb0e039bf30cf85e2066401f9a384427c47ea8.
 > 
 > I was bold enough to retain the xref change in (Setting Up the Daemon)
 > prompted by Ludo, because starting a sentence with @xref is recommended
 > in the Texinfo manual and its examples, while @pxref at the start of a
 > phrase is not preferrable, according to the “info "(texinfo)@pxref"”.
 > 
 > Again, Texinfo cross-references are complicated.
 > 
 > (In the German translations, I always wrote only @ref, but only because
 > @xref is not properly translated; Emacs in particular is not
 > internationalized at all.)
 
Sounds good, thank you!