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[bug#36404] [PATCH 6/6] doc: Add section for 'guix deploy'.


From: Christopher Lemmer Webber
Subject: [bug#36404] [PATCH 6/6] doc: Add section for 'guix deploy'.
Date: Sat, 29 Jun 2019 17:43:04 -0400
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Jakob L. Kreuze writes:

> +The file should evaluate to a list of machines, rather than just one.

This phrasing confused me for a second, because it could be just one
machine in that list.

How about:

  The file should evaluate to a list of @var{machine} objects.
or:
  The file should evaluate to a list of @var{<machine>} objects.

Not sure whether the angle brackets help or hurt.

Looks great otherwise.  I left a few other comments in response to the
other patches; please review and make changes, but I think there isn't
too much to do to get this in.  IMO we should get this in as quickly as
possible; I'd love to do so ideally in the next week so it doesn't
stagnate and so people can start trying to use it.

Really thrilling stuff Jakob; great work!  It's exciting to have you as
part of the Guix team.





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