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[bug#72439] [PATCH] doc: Setting Up the Daemon: Add paragraphs whom this
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pelzflorian (Florian Pelz) |
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[bug#72439] [PATCH] doc: Setting Up the Daemon: Add paragraphs whom this section is for. |
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Fri, 16 Aug 2024 23:05:25 +0200 |
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Gnus/5.13 (Gnus v5.13) |
Hi Ludo, I pushed all three of your reported typos: "the", Oxford comma
and chroots. Pushed as follow-up commit
91cf240308def2fed3b8649f5e98891171327c78
Ludovic Courtès <ludo@gnu.org> writes:
>> +During the installation, the @dfn{build daemon} that must be running
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> s/the// (I think?)
Yes, because the reader might visit ``Setting Up the Daemon'' much later
than “the” installation, no definite article is better.
Regards,
Florian
- [bug#72439] [PATCH] doc: Setting Up the Daemon: Add paragraphs whom this section is for., Florian Pelz, 2024/08/03
- [bug#72439] [PATCH v2] doc: Setting Up the Daemon: Give guidance to whom this section is useful., Florian Pelz, 2024/08/05
- [bug#72439] [PATCH v3] doc: Setting Up the Daemon: Give guidance to whom this section is useful., Florian Pelz, 2024/08/06
- [bug#72439] [PATCH] doc: Setting Up the Daemon: Add paragraphs whom this section is for., Vincent Legoll, 2024/08/08
- [bug#72439] [PATCH v4] doc: Setting Up the Daemon: Give guidance to whom this section is useful., Florian Pelz, 2024/08/09
- [bug#72439] [PATCH] doc: Setting Up the Daemon: Add paragraphs whom this section is for., Ludovic Courtès, 2024/08/16