[Office-commits] r10013 - trunk/campaigns/windows7sins

[sysadmin]

Author: www-data
Date: Tue Oct  6 12:34:41 2009
New Revision: 10013

Log:
web commit by peterb

Modified:
   trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/pr-ngo-email.mdwn

Modified: trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/pr-ngo-email.mdwn
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--- trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/pr-ngo-email.mdwn      Tue Oct  6 12:31:31 
2009        (r10012)
+++ trunk/campaigns/windows7sins/pr-ngo-email.mdwn      Tue Oct  6 12:34:41 
2009        (r10013)
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-You previously covered our 'Windows 7 Sins' campaign, in which we
+You previously covered the launch of our 'Windows 7 Sins' campaign, in which we
 asked the Fortune 500 companies (except Microsoft) to stop using
 proprietary software from Microsoft, Apple and Adobe and switch to
 GNU/Linux:
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 and to help foster awareness of the ethical importance of computer
 user freedom.
 
-Below is the press release under embargo until tomorrow October 7th along with 
the text of the letter. If you'd like to have any additional information about 
the response to the campaign, or would like to do an interview or need 
additional quotes please contact us.
+Below is the press release under embargo until tomorrow October 7th, along 
with the text of the letter. If you'd like to have any additional information 
about the large response we've had to the campaign, or would like to do an 
interview or need additional quotes please contact us.
 
 Press contacts: