[Savannah-cvs] administration/content gnu-content/homepage.txt...

[Karl Berry]

CVSROOT:        /web/administration
Module name:    administration
Changes by:     Karl Berry <karl>       08/06/16 16:53:47

Modified files:
        content/gnu-content: homepage.txt 
        content/nongnu-content: homepage.txt 

Log message:
        typos, English

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/administration/content/gnu-content/homepage.txt?cvsroot=administration&r1=1.36&r2=1.37
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/administration/content/nongnu-content/homepage.txt?cvsroot=administration&r1=1.25&r2=1.26

Patches:
Index: gnu-content/homepage.txt
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/administration/administration/content/gnu-content/homepage.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.36
retrieving revision 1.37
diff -u -b -r1.36 -r1.37
--- gnu-content/homepage.txt    14 Jun 2008 22:34:47 -0000      1.36
+++ gnu-content/homepage.txt    16 Jun 2008 16:53:44 -0000      1.37
@@ -3,27 +3,30 @@
 Software</a>:</p>
 
 <p><ul>
-<li>We host free project that run on free operating systems and without 
propriatery software</li>
-<li>Our service runs with 100% free software, including <a 
href="/projects/savane-cleanup">itself</a></li>
+<li>We host free projects that run on free operating systems and without
+    any proprietary software dependencies</li>
+<li>Our service runs with 100% free software, including <a
+    href="/projects/savane-cleanup">itself</a></li>
 <li><a 
href="http://savannah.gnu.org/maintenance/WhyChooseSavannah";>More...</a></li>
 </ul></p>
 
-<p>Savannah aim to be a central point for development, maintenance and
+<p>Savannah aims to be a central point for development, maintenance and
 distribution of <a
-href="http://www.gnu.org/gnu/thegnuproject.html";>GNU Software</a>.
-Plus, for projects that are free but not part of the GNU project we
-provide <a href="http://savannah.nongnu.org/";>savannah.nongnu.org</a>.
+href="http://www.gnu.org/gnu/thegnuproject.html";>official GNU
+software</a>.  In additions, for projects that are free software but not
+part of the GNU project we provide <a
+href="http://savannah.nongnu.org/";>savannah.nongnu.org</a>.</p>
 
 <p>
 If you would like to use these facilities to host your
 project, then go to the <b>Register new project</b> menu entry.
 </p>
 
-<p>
-We provide two mailing-lists that you may want to subscribe to:
+<p>We provide two mailing lists that you may want to subscribe to:
 <ul>
-<li><a 
href="http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/savannah-announce";>savannah-announce</a>:
 low-volume notifications of important issues and changes at
-Savannah</li>
-<li><a 
href="http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/savannah-users";>savannah-users</a>: 
discussion of savannah-announce and any user-oriented topic</li>
+<li><a 
href="http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/savannah-announce";>savannah-announce</a>:
+    low-volume notifications of important issues and changes at Savannah</li>
+<li><a 
href="http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/savannah-users";>savannah-users</a>:
+    discussion of savannah-announce and any user-oriented topic</li>
 </ul>
 </p>

Index: nongnu-content/homepage.txt
===================================================================
RCS file: 
/web/administration/administration/content/nongnu-content/homepage.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.25
retrieving revision 1.26
diff -u -b -r1.25 -r1.26
--- nongnu-content/homepage.txt 14 Jun 2008 22:34:50 -0000      1.25
+++ nongnu-content/homepage.txt 16 Jun 2008 16:53:47 -0000      1.26
@@ -3,8 +3,10 @@
 Software</a>:</p>
 
 <p><ul>
-<li>We host free project that run on free operating systems and without 
propriatery software</li>
-<li>Our service runs with 100% free software, including <a 
href="/projects/savane-cleanup">itself</a></li>
+<li>We host free projects that run on free operating systems and without
+    any proprietary software dependencies</li>
+<li>Our service runs with 100% free software, including <a
+    href="/projects/savane-cleanup">itself</a></li>
 <li><a 
href="http://savannah.gnu.org/maintenance/WhyChooseSavannah";>More...</a></li>
 </ul></p>
 
@@ -18,19 +20,19 @@
 project, then go to the <b>Register new project</b> menu entry.
 </p>
 
-<p>
-We provide two mailing-lists that you may want to subscribe to:
+<p>We provide two mailing lists that you may want to subscribe to:
 <ul>
-<li><a 
href="http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/savannah-announce";>savannah-announce</a>:
 low-volume notifications of important issues and changes at
-Savannah</li>
-<li><a 
href="http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/savannah-users";>savannah-users</a>: 
discussion of savannah-announce and any user-oriented topic</li>
+<li><a 
href="http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/savannah-announce";>savannah-announce</a>:
+    low-volume notifications of important issues and changes at Savannah</li>
+<li><a 
href="http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/savannah-users";>savannah-users</a>:
+    discussion of savannah-announce and any user-oriented topic</li>
 </ul>
 </p>
 
 <p>If you would like to make your project part of the GNU project,
-please check the <a href="http://www.gnu.org/help/evaluation.html";>GNU
-Software Evaluation Team</a> to understand the philosophical and
+please see the <a href="http://www.gnu.org/help/evaluation.html";>GNU
+Software Evaluation</a> web page to understand the philosophical and
 technical aspects of the GNU project. Before doing this, you should
-read the <a href="http://www.gnu.org/prep/standards_toc.html";>GNU Code
+read the <a href="http://www.gnu.org/prep/standards/";>GNU Code
 Standards</a> to find out if your software complies with them and talk
 to your fellow developers about it.</p>