[Savannah-cvs] [31] wording

[Karl Berry Test]

Revision: 31
          http://svn.sv.gnu.org/viewvc/?view=rev&root=administration&revision=31
Author:   karltest
Date:     2013-09-03 00:06:50 +0000 (Tue, 03 Sep 2013)
Log Message:
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wording

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/sviki/AdminSvnImport.mdwn

Modified: trunk/sviki/AdminSvnImport.mdwn
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--- trunk/sviki/AdminSvnImport.mdwn     2013-09-02 23:47:48 UTC (rev 30)
+++ trunk/sviki/AdminSvnImport.mdwn     2013-09-03 00:06:50 UTC (rev 31)
@@ -1,26 +1,24 @@
-Here's how to import an SVN repository.
+For Savannah administrators: here's how to import an SVN repository.
 
-Make sure that SVN is already enabled for the project.
+Make sure that SVN is already enabled for the project (Select Features).
 
-You need to ask a SVN dump to the project admin as explained at
-[[SvnImportExistingRepo]].
+You need to ask the project developers to create an SVN dump as
+explained at [[SvnImportExistingRepo]].
 
 Once the user has provided it, login at Savannah. Since the process is
 usually long with lots of output, it's recommended to start it in a
 screen or redirect as below, etc.:
 
     ssh vcs
-    cd /root
-    wget -nv http://url/to/myproject.dump.bz2
-    proj=MYPROJECT
-    bzcat myproject.dump.bz2 | svnadmin load /srv/svn/$proj/ 
>&/tmp/svimport.out
-    # alternatively, to see a percentage:
-    # pv myproject.dump.bz2 | bzcat | svnadmin load -q /srv/svn/myproject/
-    rm myproject.dump.bz2
+    cd /root/vcs-imports
+    wget -nv http://url/to/theirproject.dump.bz2
+    proj=THEIRPROJECT
+    bzcat theirproj.dump.bz2 | svnadmin load /srv/svn/$proj/ 
>&/tmp/svimport.out
+    rm theirproj.dump.bz2
     chmod g+w -R /srv/svn/$proj/db/re*
 
-Sometimes a user may provided a tar of his local svn repository. In this
-case, please ask a proper svn dump (produced by `svnadmin dump`). Using
-a direct tar is not recommended because we may not be using the same
+Sometimes we may be given a tar of their svn repository. In this case,
+please ask for a proper svn dump (produced by `svnadmin dump`). Using a
+direct tar is not recommended because we may not be using the same
 versions of SVN, and sometimes the format changes with the new versions
 of SVN.