[Savannah-cvs] [548] add titles, minor rewordings

[ineiev]

Revision: 548
          
http://svn.savannah.gnu.org/viewvc/?view=rev&root=administration&revision=548
Author:   ineiev
Date:     2023-02-06 07:47:27 -0500 (Mon, 06 Feb 2023)
Log Message:
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add titles, minor rewordings

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/sviki/CplIssues.mdwn
    trunk/sviki/DualLicensing.mdwn
    trunk/sviki/NoAdvertising.mdwn
    trunk/sviki/NonGnuToGnu.mdwn
    trunk/sviki/RequirementThreshold.mdwn

Modified: trunk/sviki/CplIssues.mdwn
===================================================================
--- trunk/sviki/CplIssues.mdwn  2023-02-06 12:37:51 UTC (rev 547)
+++ trunk/sviki/CplIssues.mdwn  2023-02-06 12:47:27 UTC (rev 548)
@@ -2,6 +2,6 @@
 Eclipse Public License (EPL), is difficult to determine because this is
 a copyleft license, like the GNU GPL and the GNU LGPL.
 
-We believe that it is possible to link a CPL's library with an
+We believe that it is possible to link a CPL'd library with an
 application covered by the GNU LGPL, or with the GNU GPL + a [linking
-exception](http://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl-faq.html#LinkingOverControlledInterface).
+exception](//www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl-faq.html#LinkingOverControlledInterface).

Modified: trunk/sviki/DualLicensing.mdwn
===================================================================
--- trunk/sviki/DualLicensing.mdwn      2023-02-06 12:37:51 UTC (rev 547)
+++ trunk/sviki/DualLicensing.mdwn      2023-02-06 12:47:27 UTC (rev 548)
@@ -1,17 +1,20 @@
-Dual-licensing is when you release your project under two (or more)
+# Dual licensing
+
+Dual licensing is when you release your software under two or more
 licenses at the same time.
 
-Any code you want to integrate in your project, and for which you do not
+Any code you want to integrate in your software, and for which you do not
 hold the copyright, must be compatible with both licenses.
 
-You also need to be the sole copyright holder of the code if you want to
-pass from a single-licensing to a dual-licensing scheme.
+You also need the permission of all copyright holders of the code
+if you want to pass from a single-licensing to a dual-licensing
+scheme.
 
 Example copyright notice, for GNU GPL + EPL:
 
     You may copy, modify, and redistribute this file under the terms
     of the GNU General Public License version 2 (or, at your option,
-    any later version), and/or the Eclipse Public License version 1.0.
+    any later version), or the Eclipse Public License version 1.0.
 
     [standard GPL notice]
 

Modified: trunk/sviki/NoAdvertising.mdwn
===================================================================
--- trunk/sviki/NoAdvertising.mdwn      2023-02-06 12:37:51 UTC (rev 547)
+++ trunk/sviki/NoAdvertising.mdwn      2023-02-06 12:47:27 UTC (rev 548)
@@ -1,3 +1,5 @@
+# No ads on Savannah
+
 We do not add advertisements to our pages except FSF's fundraisers.
 
 There is no precise philosophical ground behind this decision (we're not

Modified: trunk/sviki/NonGnuToGnu.mdwn
===================================================================
--- trunk/sviki/NonGnuToGnu.mdwn        2023-02-06 12:37:51 UTC (rev 547)
+++ trunk/sviki/NonGnuToGnu.mdwn        2023-02-06 12:47:27 UTC (rev 548)
@@ -1,8 +1,10 @@
-To apply for GNU approval for your project, please read
-<http://www.gnu.org/help/evaluation.html>
+# Becoming part of the GNU Project
 
-If your project is accepted as part of the GNU project, we will get a
-notification and proceed to the migration from savannah.nongnu.org to
+To apply for GNU approval for your package, please read
+[GNU Software Evaluation](//www.gnu.org/help/evaluation.html).
+
+If your software is accepted as part of the GNU Project, we will get
+a notification and proceed to the migration from savannah.nongnu.org to
 savannah.gnu.org.
 
-Savannah Hackers: instructions at [[NonGnuToGnuSysadmin]]
+[[Instructions for Savannah Hackers|NonGnuToGnuSysadmin]]

Modified: trunk/sviki/RequirementThreshold.mdwn
===================================================================
--- trunk/sviki/RequirementThreshold.mdwn       2023-02-06 12:37:51 UTC (rev 
547)
+++ trunk/sviki/RequirementThreshold.mdwn       2023-02-06 12:47:27 UTC (rev 
548)
@@ -1,14 +1,15 @@
-When:
------
+# Approving groups with minor incompliances
 
--   your project does not pass our requirements just because tiny
-    details,
--   you understood how to fix them,
+When
 
+- your software doesn't pass our requirements just because of tiny
+  details,
+- you understood how to fix them,
+
 we usually accept the project instead of requesting a fixed version from
 you :)
 
-For example, if your project is free, does not have non-free
+For example, if your project is free, does not have nonfree
 dependencies, has consistent licensing, carries consistent copyright and
 license notices, *but* uses an old FSF address or lacks a complete copy
 of the license, we will notify you, yet approve the project without