www/server/staging gnu-website-guidelines-appen...

[Dora Scilipoti]

CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Dora Scilipoti <dora>   24/03/17 03:33:32

Modified files:
        server/staging : gnu-website-guidelines-appendix-1.html 

Log message:
        Replace 'editor' with 'publisher'; make sure it refers to the past in 
example about the orgguide.es.pdf.

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/server/staging/gnu-website-guidelines-appendix-1.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.7&r2=1.8

Patches:
Index: gnu-website-guidelines-appendix-1.html
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RCS file: /web/www/www/server/staging/gnu-website-guidelines-appendix-1.html,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -b -r1.7 -r1.8
--- gnu-website-guidelines-appendix-1.html      16 Mar 2024 08:03:26 -0000      
1.7
+++ gnu-website-guidelines-appendix-1.html      17 Mar 2024 07:33:30 -0000      
1.8
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>Sometimes a resource may be hosted in more than one acceptable place. 
-It can be a personal page at GitHub or somewhere else, or in some 
+It can be a personal page in GitHub or somewhere else, or in some 
 unrelated website. When evaluating which one to choose, consider factors
 such as: What's the status of the document? Is it a final version or is 
 it likely to be modified anytime soon? Is the URL reliably stable, or 
@@ -236,17 +236,17 @@
 <p>For example, in the past we had the case of a manual that was listed 
 in other-free-books.html with this URL:<br />
 <span 
class="bad"><code><del>https://github.com/davidam/orgguide-es</del></code></span>.<br
 />
-We had three possibilitites to replace that bad link: <br />
+At the time, we had three possibilitites to replace that bad link: <br />
 1. GotHub<br />
 <span 
class="good"><code>https://gothub.frontendfriendly.xyz/raw/davidam/davidam.github.io/master/docu/orgguide.es.pdf</code></span><br
 />
 2. Author's personal space at GitHub<br />
 <span 
class="good"><code>https://raw.githubusercontent.com/davidam/davidam.github.io/master/docu/orgguide.es.pdf</code>
 </span><br />
-3. Editor/Bookstore<br />
+3. Publisher/Bookstore<br />
 <span 
class="good"><code>https://traficantes.net/sites/default/files/pdfs/orgguide.es_.pdf</code></span><br
 />
-We decided for the third one, since it doesn't seem that the manual is
+We decided for the third one, since it didn't seem that the manual was
 likely to be updated to a new version, and <cite>Traficantes de Sueños</cite>
-is an established, well-known editor.</p>
+is an established, well-known publisher.</p>
 
 <p>Issue trackers on GitHub can be viewed and browsed without JavaScript, 
 but active participation entails an account that can't be created without 
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@
 
 <p class="unprintable">Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2024/03/16 08:03:26 $
+$Date: 2024/03/17 07:33:30 $
 <!-- timestamp end --></p>
 </div>
 </div><!-- for class="inner", starts in the banner include -->