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Re: draft release announcement
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Cameron Horsburgh |
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Re: draft release announcement |
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Thu, 2 Nov 2006 06:13:11 +1100 |
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On Tue, Oct 31, 2006 at 01:31:26AM +0100, Han-Wen Nienhuys wrote:
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> Hi guys,
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> a draft of the 2.10 release announcement is at
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> http://lilypond.org/web/announce-v2.10.html
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> please comment.
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> thanks,
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Hmm, I'm still not happy with the first sentence! How about:
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The initial inspiration for LilyPond came ten years ago when two
musician friends grew disappointed with the bland and boring look of
computer generated scores.
***
Also, the comma after 'improvements' should be replaced by a semi-colon.
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